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Wishing She Was You
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Wishing She Was You I tend to meet them in the bar-rooms. Then I sweet-talk them to my home. That's exactly where I want them ! Just her and me, Alone. I start off with a little "Chitty-chat". And maybe a beer or two. But then my mind begins to wander.... And it wishes she was you. So I dance them to the living-room. We end up snuggled on the couch. I send my hands on an expedition. They go exploring, North and south. I'm getting what I've always dreamed of. Something ... fresh and new. So how come my mind still wanders ? And wishes they were you. Eventually we end up in the bed-room. Everything's going just as planned! Sometimes... It's just THAT easy. ( I'm so GLAD, that I'm a man ! ) I'M THE KING OF THIS FUCKING CASTLE ! And every woman that comes through. So why am I feeling so... Empty ? And keep wishing... They were you. The sex is wild and tasty. I couldn't ask for more. A girl that's young and beautiful, And fucks me like a . She's snuggled up SO sweetly. Just stuck to me like glue. So why aren't I feeling satisfied ? Instead of wishing she was you. ..... I was never that much of a boyfriend. I cheated, and I lied. Until the day you caught me. And I had no place to hide. I told you I didn't need you. AND I DAMN WELL MEANT IT, TOO ! But now... I have to wonder. Why AM I wishing.... They were you ? Well, I'm living the life I asked for. I'm as happy as a clam. At least... I damn well SHOULD be. ( But I wonder if I am. ) When I told you I didn't love you... Maybe that WASN'T necessarily true. Cause I can't seem to stop from..... THINKING ! And wishing...... They were you. Goodatpoetry2 ( originally posted 9/19/2006 ) Written for another blogger on this site that I didn't even know. I was just browsing the *recent posts* and read her's by chance. She was feeling bad because she found out her boyfriend was cheating on her, and she felt that she had to break up with him. Her post was so sad. You could *hear* her tears in her writing. This post affected me more than most do. It was a very touching post. The next day at work I wrote the first half and thought I was done. But when I came home I felt that it needed something more, and wrote the last part before posting it. I also sent a copy to her blog. She asked if men ever regret the things they do. I wanted her to know that ... sometimes they do.  |
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Sadly, I just can't get into most of those *free verse* type poems. . It just has to rhyme, for me. . And even rhyming poems often lose me.  I guess I just like MY poems...  And I agree... simple, but to the point is how I like my poetry and stories. . When things are written so even a young person can understand it, I feel that it's done well. But then there are those, like Wicked, that can write so beautifully and yet be not so direct ( if that's the right word ).  Thanks. . 
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Yeah, that woman's post just got to me. . She seemed so hurt. .  I hardly write anything anymore but just recycle some of my old poems sometimes. . I'll always be a long wait. .  Thanks!
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male or female, i think we all have previous partners we hope are feeling the way the man is in your poem It's nice to think that, anyway. Thanks.
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male or female, i think we all have previous partners we hope are feeling the way the man is in your poem Read RESPECT WE all NEED to do Better and Re Petition to Stop Transsexuals from Using Female Profiles
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Thank you for understanding.  Some women thought I was writing about me, and gave me hell about it. 
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From one poet to another, not bad., not bad at all.  Thank you.. So glad you stopped by. I've saved your blog as a favorite and will look forward to more posts.
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From one poet to another, not bad., not bad at all.
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Nicely written, and very thought provoking. Monogamy can be impossible sometimes.....but how we yearn for its security. After reading that woman's post, for some reason it affected me hard. It wasn't even someone I knew, just some *recent post* that caught my eye. It was such a sad post. I think that's why it moved me so much. I went to work the next day and wrote the first part. When I got home, I realized that it needed something more, and wrote the second part. It's one of my favorites because it's so emotional to me. Thanks again.
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Nicely written, and very thought provoking. Monogamy can be impossible sometimes.....but how we yearn for its security.
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Great answer! I harked rum up my nose reading it! Sorry about that...
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I could swear I saw Kipling in here somewhere.... The first time I posted it ( for that woman ) I got some nasty replies. Some of the women thought that it was about ME.  Thanks!
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Thank you. It's usually the man that's been cheating. And it's also usually *just* about sex. So they give up what may be a great relationship for a moment's pleasure. There's lots to regret when that happens.
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Silver, WHAT...are YOU doing here? LOL! This is an OLD one! [ But I like this one SO much. ] I see what you're doing! You're actually reading all my links in the movie! You don't have to do THAT! LOL! You NUT!
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Spunky, Thanks man! But you really don't have to read them. But isn't this funny? Two more to go, and the REAL fun begins!
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Flyaway, LOL! That was SO cute! Yeah, don't I WISH I could fly out of this place! I'm tired. Hey! Cool! It's time for another pain pill! Woo-Hoo!
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NoStrings, Thank you. Yes, "I wish it was you" could easily mean the *perfect* one. A soulmate. Even one that you just haven't met yet. "Better late than never". HOW true! And I apologize you your past hurts. Because, YOU, are every-woman. And I, am every-man.
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Baroness, You? Spammed? I'll be reading THAT! LOL!
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10/6/2006 4:25 pm |
Hun...it'll get better; try to cool your brain down as well as your body from all the heat {especially considering where you work and all}. See ya later, I'm headed off to work...I spammed my own blog earlier, to give me something to do then and for you to have something to read this weekend...take care, babe! 
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Cupid, Thank you. The funny ones are, well, fun. But the more serious it is, the more it can upset me, sometimes. But I just can't stop from doing it. I just wrote someone a poem who needed one, just 5 minutes ago. I wrote it as I read her post. So sad. And now I'm tired already. Special lady. 66 yrs old and maybe losing her daughter-in law. So sad.
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Miss chieve, Thank you. I think many of do have regrets, but it's probably too late when we figure that out.
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10/1/2006 2:30 am |
Thanx Hun It's nice to reminded you boyz do have a conscience and regrets. Men don't show enough of this and when you do us woman recieve it gratefully.
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Ineedit, Thank you. How sweet! I think almost everyone has felt this, from one side or the other. I thought it might be good women to know, that even the jerks might have regreted it later.
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Cuummdrop, Thank you. Every once-in awhile I get a pretty good one. I think this is one of them. Not a happy poem, for sure, but it get's the poit across.
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Greatboobs, And thank you for understanding. I hope it helps to know that someone might just be feeling that way. That's why I wrote it. I was hoping it might ease some pain for some. It's really a very sad poem.
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Oral, Yep! You BET it is! I was young and foolish, and I just wouldn't let it happen, for stupid reasons, if any. Sie la vie! [ obviously, I don't speak French! LOL! ]
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