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I love this text nicejob
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Writing is a lot of work but I was once advised of the difference in what we know in our heads and what gets put on paper. Take this one sentence for example... In itself (rewritten), its actually an entire paragraph - in itself. Written with excruciating detail as one would do in erotica, you'd probably turn this 1,100 words in to 5,000. Just food for thought  Elise reached down, took Dane’s hard cock into her hand and began to stroke it, simultaneously stroking her clit with his head Gazing into his eyes Elise reaches down brushed her arms ever so gently against herself until her hands could feel Dane’s cock taking all attention away from her caress. Her fingers and hands twisted with the grace of ballerina’s until his erection lay gently in her hands as she began to stroke it. Leaning her hips in closer her hands began to stroke her pubis exciting her clit until she surrenders to her own desires. Slightly shifting as to not raise attention Elise positions his cock so each stroke of her hands simultaneously stimulates her clit with the head of his hard cock….. I've always wondered about the level of detail the lay person puts into erotica. Does what they write reflect a level of 'attention to detail' they perceive when they are with a partner?
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Interesting , lingering pace my lady - Bravo ! Maybe some space in each paragraph, would attenuate the heightening of the senses in a more clear way, without changing the editor requirements ( speaking from comics storyboarding here, and just a thought ) Cheers my lady, and keep it up P
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Loved it. It gave me a hard-on and I'm really aroused now. Loved the play with Elise's breasts. I looked back and forth at your breasts while I read it and imagined Elise's looked like yours. I like how Dane was going to cum, but they held off so they could continue having sex.
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I ADORE it when a lady takes control of my cock and uses it like her personal dildo. I Dont Care How Bad it Gets, Im Never Is This Sharing a Bit Too Much What Will Cum Next [post 3312759] My Private Blog - Tell Me ALL Your Secrets
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Dessert El Fresco PERFECT 😈😈😈😈
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You definitely heated me up with this sexy story, I hope you have a great weekend hun.. Seduce the mind and see what a wonderful adventure the body will take you on.. 
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Yes indeed. That truly was a work of erotic art
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7/21/2019 3:36 am |
You have a way of telling a story! Great Blog.
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You have a beautiful way with words. Make me feel like I’m in the story. Great job.
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I enjoyed this.
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7/29/2019 8:52 pm |
Love the story
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